Comments on: My Poetry http://amopage.com/blog/2008/03/my-poetry/ Wed, 30 Mar 2011 16:19:46 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: streetsideguitarman http://amopage.com/blog/2008/03/my-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-1495 streetsideguitarman Thu, 27 Mar 2008 16:57:47 +0000 http://amopage.com/blog/archives/496#comment-1495 You really do have a gift.. These few lines below are so beautifully crafted, and so real/natural, Its unbelievable.. For a grandmother who still is not free of nightmares about when she was three, but she’s on the narrow road, and she knows she’s not alone. If I could be so brash, could I ask you to take a look at something I have written and comment?(Sometimes It feels like Im writing nothing that has any rhyme or reason and would appreciate a few words from someone like you :-) ) http://www.thisisby.us/index.php/?&u=11991&sc=2 You really do have a gift..
These few lines below are so beautifully crafted, and so real/natural, Its unbelievable..

For a grandmother who still is not free
of nightmares about when she was three,
but she’s on the narrow road,
and she knows she’s not alone.

If I could be so brash, could I ask you to take a look at something I have written and comment?(Sometimes It feels like Im writing nothing that has any rhyme or reason and would appreciate a few words from someone like you :-) )

http://www.thisisby.us/index.php/?&u=11991&sc=2

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